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Literature
Gift Wrapped
“So, it's Peter’s birthday tomorrow.” I nodded absently at Kevin’s declaration, absorbed in my story.
“Yes.”
“Do you know what you're getting him?” He pressed. I rolled my eyes, annoyed.
“Yes. We're going out,” I said shortly. Kevin chuckled.
“Don't you want to know what gonna get him?” I finally looked up, a scowl twisting my features.
“What?” He grinned.
“You.” I blinked once, then he pulled out a roll of red ribbon. “Now turn around.” My eyes widened, and I put my hands up.
“Oh, no. Nonononono.” He smiled innocent
Literature
Trimming the Ivy Tree
“Loo loo loo, doing decorating stuff,” Harley Quinn hummed to herself as she hung paper directions from the roof of her and her girlfriend Poison Ivy’s apartment. “Doing decorating stuff is my favorite stuff.”
Stepping off the stepladder, Harley looked around the apartment. All around were strands of tinsel, candy canes, snowmen, reindeer, and snowflakes. The only thing in the apartment that didn’t look festive was a small corner of the living room that remained bare, but hopefully not for long…
“Harley, I’m home!”
Harley ran up to her girlfriend and placed her in a crushing hug.
Literature
Treevenge
Simplicity eyed the large, carefully wrapped, and sealed box on the floor by the counter of the bookshop. She supped her coffee as she continued to eye it, warily. Much as she had done for the better part of the morning so far, when she'd found it left outside the door, on the street, addressed to her. From Morgan. It was large, and long, and fairly heavy. And rather alarmingly, it had moved. It had a fairly...rectangular, cuboid...long shape. A fairly Christmas-tree shape. She had a bad feeling about- “Why are you dressed like that?” Mr Tibblesworth hopped onto the counter, peering at her. “What, you don't like it?” Simplicity glanced down at herself. “It's Christmas.” Her hair was down, falling loose down her back, given she wasn't going out or anything. And she wore a large woolly sweater, hanging off one shoulder, the hem below her waist, in red and patterned with white Christmas trees and reindeer and other stuff. And on her legs a pair of thick, warm, black and red striped
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It's Kaatryn~! So, I'm making this story as a contest entry for a little contest Finally... Plus Christmas contest! (Blarg) being held by once again involving the BDSM Sorority, back to their old tricks~
Kaatryn "Kat" belongs to
The BDSM Sorority belongs to me
Kaatryn "Kat" belongs to
The BDSM Sorority belongs to me
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The pacing and structure of this story is really rather good. I like having the story begin where her predicament ends up but without spoiling anything, saving the stinger in the story until the end reveal.
There's a few spelling and grammar issues here and there (two she's where I think another word was supposed to be for instance) but it doesn't detract from the reading any (and frankly I'm a little picky when it comes down to it).
I also love the descriptions of the outfits and various things that are used. It really gives me a clear image of the action. I love descriptive stories and I get a good sense of things with this.
I think this is a pretty nice quality piece. Good work overall.